“What
is in it for me?” asked the Hell Warden.
The
Gatekeeper was in no pleasant mood. He was irritated with the Hell Warden for
having put in place this Hellnet and setting off the whole issue. His
assistant, who had accompanied him, was another source of irritation with his
ill-advised enthusiasm for the Net.
“Would
you like to spend some time as an inmate at your place?” he asked silkily. With
a meaningful glance at his assistant, he continued, “I have someone who is
eager to take your place.”
Both
of them blanched at the thought of what an angry Gatekeeper was suggesting. The
Gatekeeper smiled inwardly with satisfaction. Keeping a multitude of souls
happy was not a job that you could be happy in and you had to take your
satisfaction where you could get it.
Three
days of stubbornness was all Jack could manage before he was back in Heaven. No
matter how galling the thought of admitting his foolishness, it was not worse
than what Hell had done to him in those three days. Playing Becoming Hell-Warden
was fun and sending and reading interesting messages was exciting. It was what
happened the rest of the time that did not bear contemplation.
“Believe
me guys! The only thing Heavenly about Hell is the Net. The rest is sheer
torture” said he with a shudder.
The
other souls looked at him disbelievingly.
absolutely loved it!! all 5 parts. great writing :)
ReplyDeleteGood to hear these things...even if it is only said out of politeness:):)
DeleteGreat effort. C.S. Enjoyed the read. Kind of reminded me of a highly watered down version of man and superman with internet thrown in.
ReplyDeleteThanks TF!
DeleteHi Suresh,
ReplyDeleteGuess you have let your imagination run wild and soar all the way up heavenwards :D Nice posts! All five of em' . :)
Thanks, Jaish
DeleteYOu are an highly imaginative fellow !!!
ReplyDeleteYOur Narration is way diffrent from mine !!!
But its good
Thanks Rahul! Good to hear that from you
DeleteVery innovative posts--unless & until we experience hell we can't appreciate heaven.
ReplyDeleteThanks Indu! I am lucky that I manage to communicate my point to at least one person every time:)
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