Friday, May 18, 2012

Heaven in Hell - Part V


“What is in it for me?” asked the Hell Warden.
The Gatekeeper was in no pleasant mood. He was irritated with the Hell Warden for having put in place this Hellnet and setting off the whole issue. His assistant, who had accompanied him, was another source of irritation with his ill-advised enthusiasm for the Net.
“Would you like to spend some time as an inmate at your place?” he asked silkily. With a meaningful glance at his assistant, he continued, “I have someone who is eager to take your place.”
Both of them blanched at the thought of what an angry Gatekeeper was suggesting. The Gatekeeper smiled inwardly with satisfaction. Keeping a multitude of souls happy was not a job that you could be happy in and you had to take your satisfaction where you could get it.
Three days of stubbornness was all Jack could manage before he was back in Heaven. No matter how galling the thought of admitting his foolishness, it was not worse than what Hell had done to him in those three days. Playing Becoming Hell-Warden was fun and sending and reading interesting messages was exciting. It was what happened the rest of the time that did not bear contemplation.
“Believe me guys! The only thing Heavenly about Hell is the Net. The rest is sheer torture” said he with a shudder.
The other souls looked at him disbelievingly.

10 comments:

  1. absolutely loved it!! all 5 parts. great writing :)

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    1. Good to hear these things...even if it is only said out of politeness:):)

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  2. Great effort. C.S. Enjoyed the read. Kind of reminded me of a highly watered down version of man and superman with internet thrown in.

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  3. Hi Suresh,

    Guess you have let your imagination run wild and soar all the way up heavenwards :D Nice posts! All five of em' . :)

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  4. YOu are an highly imaginative fellow !!!
    YOur Narration is way diffrent from mine !!!
    But its good

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    1. Thanks Rahul! Good to hear that from you

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  5. Very innovative posts--unless & until we experience hell we can't appreciate heaven.

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    1. Thanks Indu! I am lucky that I manage to communicate my point to at least one person every time:)

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